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	<title>Comments on: Rapping On Writing - Character, Story and the Utter FAILURE that is THE EMPIRE STRIKES BACK</title>
	<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710</link>
	<description>At Play In The Field Of Our Words, Chopping That Verbal Cotton</description>
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		<title>By: NLP Zine</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-22867</link>
		<author>NLP Zine</author>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Jul 2009 21:03:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great blog. Do you know of any relevant NLP forums or discussion groups?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great blog. Do you know of any relevant NLP forums or discussion groups?</p>
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		<title>By: Joshua James</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19081</link>
		<author>Joshua James</author>
		<pubDate>Sun, 23 Mar 2008 22:18:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19081</guid>
		<description>I did not know that, Cat-Daddy.  

Makes sense, but yeah, they should have come up with something new for 6 to end with a bang . . . like a huge, I don't know, monster SUN that eats galaxies, right?

Heh</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I did not know that, Cat-Daddy.  </p>
<p>Makes sense, but yeah, they should have come up with something new for 6 to end with a bang . . . like a huge, I don&#8217;t know, monster SUN that eats galaxies, right?</p>
<p>Heh</p>
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		<title>By: Andrew Bellware</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19061</link>
		<author>Andrew Bellware</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Mar 2008 14:33:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19061</guid>
		<description>Interestingly the death star ending of episode 6 was always intended. Lucas apparently put the death star being destroyed at the end of episode 4 because he realized he needed something big to end that movie with. But he didn't then go and change the end of 6 to be anything different.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Interestingly the death star ending of episode 6 was always intended. Lucas apparently put the death star being destroyed at the end of episode 4 because he realized he needed something big to end that movie with. But he didn&#8217;t then go and change the end of 6 to be anything different.</p>
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		<title>By: Qui Nguyen</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19043</link>
		<author>Qui Nguyen</author>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 06:07:01 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19043</guid>
		<description>This is an awesome post, man!  Really loved it.  I'm obviously a huge Star Wars geek and can't agree more.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is an awesome post, man!  Really loved it.  I&#8217;m obviously a huge Star Wars geek and can&#8217;t agree more.</p>
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		<title>By: Joshua James</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19040</link>
		<author>Joshua James</author>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 04:15:01 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19040</guid>
		<description>;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p> <img src='http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /></p>
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		<title>By: Mystery Man</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19039</link>
		<author>Mystery Man</author>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 03:41:14 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19039</guid>
		<description>Now you're just toying with me, as you KNOW those are my biggest pet peeves.  Hehehe...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Now you&#8217;re just toying with me, as you KNOW those are my biggest pet peeves.  Hehehe&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Joshua James</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19037</link>
		<author>Joshua James</author>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 00:29:31 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19037</guid>
		<description>Thanks man. 

In a way, it's what makes writing unlike mathematics . . . it's an undefinable sensation (not unlike music) that cannot really be graphed, much as we'd like to.  So many of the industry gurus seem to wish to break down successful films in ways just like that, like math.  

But too many great movies defy the math of McKee and his ilk. 

Some moments, put together properly, equal much, much more than the sum of their parts.  

And we can't explain why.  We can only point at the moment and go "There."

Problem is, in a screenplay, many folks don't look when you point.  They're looking for the "Arc" or any of the other mathematic structures they believe all successful films have.  So there's a disconnect. 

But yeah, that's some of my musings on it.  More on this subject later.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks man. </p>
<p>In a way, it&#8217;s what makes writing unlike mathematics . . . it&#8217;s an undefinable sensation (not unlike music) that cannot really be graphed, much as we&#8217;d like to.  So many of the industry gurus seem to wish to break down successful films in ways just like that, like math.  </p>
<p>But too many great movies defy the math of McKee and his ilk. </p>
<p>Some moments, put together properly, equal much, much more than the sum of their parts.  </p>
<p>And we can&#8217;t explain why.  We can only point at the moment and go &#8220;There.&#8221;</p>
<p>Problem is, in a screenplay, many folks don&#8217;t look when you point.  They&#8217;re looking for the &#8220;Arc&#8221; or any of the other mathematic structures they believe all successful films have.  So there&#8217;s a disconnect. </p>
<p>But yeah, that&#8217;s some of my musings on it.  More on this subject later.</p>
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		<title>By: Mystery Man</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19036</link>
		<author>Mystery Man</author>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 00:24:12 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19036</guid>
		<description>I loved this article.  I never thought to try to define the reasons Empire resonates so much with people.  I personally love the look of the film.  In terms of story, it's a real pot-boiler in the sense that it just keeps moving along.  I don't believe there's an Act One, which is nice, and it just jumps right in to the story.  I never thought about all those setbacks, and I guess most people would feel okay with that because of the endurance factor (brilliant point) and I guess, too, they know that the road to victory is always paved with endless setbacks.  There are also some great heightened emotional moments that I love to experience again and again like Yoda lifting the X-Wing out of the swamp, the news from Darth about being Luke's father, and that emotional moment when Han gets frozen into carbonite.  The look on Leia's face and Chewbacca's whining gets me every time.

And ya know, I understand what you mean.  I don't feel even remotely close to nailing why it works.

Great post, man.  Loved it.

-MM</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I loved this article.  I never thought to try to define the reasons Empire resonates so much with people.  I personally love the look of the film.  In terms of story, it&#8217;s a real pot-boiler in the sense that it just keeps moving along.  I don&#8217;t believe there&#8217;s an Act One, which is nice, and it just jumps right in to the story.  I never thought about all those setbacks, and I guess most people would feel okay with that because of the endurance factor (brilliant point) and I guess, too, they know that the road to victory is always paved with endless setbacks.  There are also some great heightened emotional moments that I love to experience again and again like Yoda lifting the X-Wing out of the swamp, the news from Darth about being Luke&#8217;s father, and that emotional moment when Han gets frozen into carbonite.  The look on Leia&#8217;s face and Chewbacca&#8217;s whining gets me every time.</p>
<p>And ya know, I understand what you mean.  I don&#8217;t feel even remotely close to nailing why it works.</p>
<p>Great post, man.  Loved it.</p>
<p>-MM</p>
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		<title>By: Joshua James</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19035</link>
		<author>Joshua James</author>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Mar 2008 19:34:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19035</guid>
		<description>Oh and Mickey, thanks man!</description>
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		<title>By: Joshua James</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19034</link>
		<author>Joshua James</author>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Mar 2008 19:34:13 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19034</guid>
		<description>Thanks guys - 

Terraling: I'd heard about that revenge edit, never saw it but it sounds cool . . . 

James: I agree with you, and thanks for the shout out. One tiny thing, Raiders would be slightly different at the end had Jones stayed home - probably no one would have ever found the Ark (Nazis were looking in the wrong place) but your point remains the same.

And I never figured out how Jones knew to close his eyes but the French guy didn't (but the French guy figured he had to dress in robes) or, once everyone was dead, how Jones got the Ark back into its crate without opening his eyes, heh. 

but who cares, by that point, right?  Heh.

Ray Anne - Yes, I guess you could view this as a potential act two (then how come Leia makes out with Luke, when they know they're siblings in act III?) but than that doesn't explain why this act was sooo much better than the other acts, right? 

That's what I'm trying to do.  Whether we look at it as a part of a whole or an individual film, there were things in there that made it truly spectacular, right?  That's what this discussion is about. 

Godfather I and II both were awesome.  III not so much.  All parts of one story and all individual stories themselves. 

I do think one thing that separates EMPIRE from the others is Luke's discovery of his father.  It goes to the core of our being, finding out who we are and what we do (and when you think about it, Michael Corleone discovers the same thing when he kills for his father and goes back to Sicily, he discovers who his father was, what that means and now who he, himself, might be) and who may can or cannot become as a result. 

there's something in there, in the identity and humanity, that really rings for me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks guys - </p>
<p>Terraling: I&#8217;d heard about that revenge edit, never saw it but it sounds cool . . . </p>
<p>James: I agree with you, and thanks for the shout out. One tiny thing, Raiders would be slightly different at the end had Jones stayed home - probably no one would have ever found the Ark (Nazis were looking in the wrong place) but your point remains the same.</p>
<p>And I never figured out how Jones knew to close his eyes but the French guy didn&#8217;t (but the French guy figured he had to dress in robes) or, once everyone was dead, how Jones got the Ark back into its crate without opening his eyes, heh. </p>
<p>but who cares, by that point, right?  Heh.</p>
<p>Ray Anne - Yes, I guess you could view this as a potential act two (then how come Leia makes out with Luke, when they know they&#8217;re siblings in act III?) but than that doesn&#8217;t explain why this act was sooo much better than the other acts, right? </p>
<p>That&#8217;s what I&#8217;m trying to do.  Whether we look at it as a part of a whole or an individual film, there were things in there that made it truly spectacular, right?  That&#8217;s what this discussion is about. </p>
<p>Godfather I and II both were awesome.  III not so much.  All parts of one story and all individual stories themselves. </p>
<p>I do think one thing that separates EMPIRE from the others is Luke&#8217;s discovery of his father.  It goes to the core of our being, finding out who we are and what we do (and when you think about it, Michael Corleone discovers the same thing when he kills for his father and goes back to Sicily, he discovers who his father was, what that means and now who he, himself, might be) and who may can or cannot become as a result. </p>
<p>there&#8217;s something in there, in the identity and humanity, that really rings for me.</p>
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		<title>By: Mickey Lee</title>
		<link>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19032</link>
		<author>Mickey Lee</author>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Mar 2008 19:06:01 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://writerjoshuajames.com/dailydojo/?p=710#comment-19032</guid>
		<description>Nice job, JJ!</description>
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